business letter

Enkhbat Bilguun
9-35 sukhebator district
UB, Mongolia
September21, 2009

Ms. Daphne Mackey
Instructor
University of Washington
1321 4th Ave
Seattle WA 98201

Dear Ms. Daphne,
As requested, I am writing to let you know that I have registered for the online business writing program. I work in Alta International, a financial services company, where I have recently moved from a clerical position to a position in the training department.
I am now in charge of sending new members of our organization to training programs both here and overseas.
I have studied English since high school and studied for one year in Ulanbator. However, I have never studied business writing and I now need to write a lot of letters and e-mail in my job.
I am looking forward to learning a lot of new things in this course.
I hope to hear from you soon.
Thank you,
Enkhbat, Bilguun
BILGUUN ENKHBAT